thank you, this makes me die everytime i see it - writing from casket

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I'm gonna be honest and say this is a hard okay. The concept is fine and the animation is competent, the execution in the writing department could use a lot of work. I feel like we don't really get a clear age for the main characters in the animation itself (Idk if there's additional info on twitter or something so I'm going off what was in this) off the bat and it was confusing. I understand they're school aged, but I can't tell if the characters are middle school aged or high school, plus some other characters look wildly different in age also (like the big wolf guy who looked and sounded like an adult kissing the very small girl character for example). In another animation of these guys, I'd clarify that immediately because it was confusing for me as a viewer to gauge this very important character information.

Speaking of, I think you could do with fleshing them out a bit more and making them feel more like people but that isn't a huge problem since this is just a pilot. I'd consider this for the future though because the mouse and the cat kind of feel... empty? Overall they have potential, a grumpy guy and upbeat buddy combo are a great trope but they don't have a lot going on outside that.

Generally speaking, this is a fine animation! I just wish the story was a bit more interesting imo

broo i remember playing the original flash game back then!! nice recreation, i love how you drew reuben!

So fun and wild, can't wait to see more!

big nostalgia blast, still haven't beaten repetance yet-

Top ten songs to shout "LETS GOOOO" to, love this so much!

this made me dance around my apartment like a rotten redditor, thank you 😌

yesssss love this movieeeeee, you made the little nowhere man look really cute!

im the fuckinggg joker i make fucking cool jokes

obscure childhood game mentioned! cute art too, really good at capturing how its one big stage play